Please read the beggining of my story and please tell me what you honestly thought of it. thnks =)?

Honestly, I couldn't read it all I lost interest after the first couple of sentences. It sounds a little amatuerish and sometimes when you use a lot of descripitive words in the same sentence it makes it choppy and too long. I would also suggest not using the name Topanga since it's not as common and its from Boy Meets World that's what people might think of instead of what you're writing about. Good Luck though =)